Wednesday, May 20, 2009

Potty Break

"Oh look, he's coming this way!"
"I really do hope he wants to ride us!"
"Shh! Here he is!"
The man looked around the vast expanse of the stables, as if he was searching for something.
"Hello? is anyone here?" He called.
The horses silently watched him standing, waiting for a reply. After a brief period of time, he walked back outside, muttering under his breath.
"I could of sworn I'd heard someone. . ."
"Hello? Hello there?"
The man spun around to face the source of the voice. It was a middle aged woman with copper hair. The horses knew her to be the owner of the Estate.
"Hello, welcome to Steamboat Stables. I'm Marge."
"Hey, I'm Hugh Jaweeni."
"Looking for a horse? you look like a jockey."
Hugh laughed "That's very observant of you, I am indeed a jockey. But I was actually wondering if I could use your bathroom. Gotta see a man about a horse, you know?"
Laughter was shared between them.
"Of course. This way, Hugh."
They left the stables, towards the house. The horses noticed something glinting in Marge's eyes. An emotion, passionate, but without any clear direction.

Was the emotion (A) Lust for the jockey, or (B) Greed for the jockey's Wealth

16 comments:

  1. revenge of the night says lust for the jockey

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  2. I think it had better be greed, least troublesome of the two seven deadly sins you are proposing.

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  3. Ewwwww! i would go with lust. The other is very impolite and i would not want to read the next addition if it goes to greed. Killing someone for wealth is not a good thing!

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  4. Strawberries and lemonade say:
    Lust.
    that is by far the better sin.
    (go watch Full Metal Alchemist, then you'll see what I mean)

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  5. The Malefactor Doctrine says b

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